Writing the first stage
Zoomable draft page
This is a rough draft of the October chapter with further edits made in pen by the author.
At this stage, the author has already spent a considerable time writing the initial story down. However, we can see that for Rush, the writing process goes through many stages before he will consider it finished. At this stage, the book is very much a work-in-progress.
Editing and re-writing
Although 'A twelvemonth and a day' follows the life of a young boy through a linear calendar progression, the writing process isn't necessarily a one-way path.
Working through draft stages helps the author produce a stronger, more focused work. It highlights connections and allows for movement between recollection, creativity and the phases of writing.
What this draft stage shows is the author's writing process in visual form on the page. A writer refines, re-writes and edits his work until he or she is satisfied with the finished result. This can take weeks, months or even years.
You can also read a transcript of this video.
Questions for discussion
- Read the rough draft and think about the writing process the author is going through here. He has clearly gone some way to committing his ideas to paper. Why do you think he has then gone on to make minor word changes in some areas and larger revisions in others?
- What kind of edits has the author made? Are these embellishments, stylistic changes or do they change the meaning of what's written?
- Think about what the author is trying to convey, do you agree with the author that these changes work better?
Literacy and English experiences and outcomes: LIT4-07a; LIT 4-08a; LIT 4-09a; LIT 4-11a; LIT 4-14a; ENG4-17a; ENG 4-19a.